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Apr 30, 2010 | 4:10 PM EDT

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Okay, this was part of my coursework for university and I'm submitting it now before I get too ashamed of it later. The simple purpose of the animation from an academic topic was to show how flash allows solo animators to become "True Autuers", in that they can make or at least control/edit every part of an animation themselves.

Put simply, The main character, Miles, found a pair of nifty headphones that can elevate his reactions and muscular functions through data that's transmitted as music (to help stop the user going crazy, letting them use them for longer.)

He's stopping a group of civilians that are being kidnapped to be turned into mechanical robots for devious schemes. Yes, the main villain must clearly be DR. ROBOTNIK *cough*nonotreally.*cough *

Feel free to lash out about the many many things in this that could be vastly improved such as the sub-par voice acting much of this was done with little to no sleep at the time. I'll learn how to do things to an acceptable degree EVENTUALLY. Other than that, enjoy.

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Please don't distribute this on flash/video hosting sites, you can ask me to upload it for you on whatever if you want, like YouTube, and I'll likely comply. kthnxbai!

*EDIT*

HOLY CRAP, FRONT PAGE? THAT'S SO COOL. THANKS VERY MUCH TO WHOEVER WAS RESPONSIBLE FOR THIS MADNESS YOU ARE AWESOME AND THANK YOU FOR WATCHING ^_^

Reviews


astwo15astwo15

Rated 5 / 5 stars

MY GOD

DUDE THIS IS A GOOD STORY DUDE U HAVE TO DO SOME EPESODES



wakkatidus1234wakkatidus1234

Rated 5 / 5 stars

ohhh

i want to see more :(



rjblaze215rjblaze215

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Pretty good!

One thing that wonders me though which i know is irrelevant but...

Do you have some sort of problem saying your "S's. Sound a bit exaggerated :3


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KiddaleeKiddalee

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Change the Dialogue

If this is the only human civilization left, I think it would be too small for the government to deceive easily; why does the government bother claiming that drafted people "volunteered"? It seems more believable to me that they would get the notice and tell their families the truth; either that, or they go missing in the middle of their day. They're neither convicts nor ghetto residents: they all have unique clothes which aren't threadbare. I think it would be more realistic if they are drafted and know it. The regime is desperate enough, I think it could function that way.

The action is great. Because the animation is so short, there is infinite flexibility for the reason why those people are captive and why the hero is saving them. What was that, 25 seconds of dialogue? You could change that to anything.

I like your drawing and the music sets an excited mood. Your execution is solid, it's just the story that I feel needs work.


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Link3Kokiri responds:

Very good point. I'll try and mix around with reasons of as to how/why people are getting kidnapped exactly.


salmonhaloclocksalmonhaloclock

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

RIBBONS OF DOOM

I think you need to make a seris of this...and without a lisp.


Link3Kokiri responds:

LOL, I HAS A LISP NOW?