Tired of waiting?
Click here to disable ads!
You are not logged in. If you sign up for an account,
you can gain additional voting power over time, allowing your vote to have an even
greater impact on submission scores!
This is just a flash movie i made for a project,it may not be the best because it's my first.
Tell me what you think.
Voiced by- LPX487
Awesome flash video
Not to bad.
I see this one is educational! Although there could be a few improvements when you say certain parts of the heart. It may be helpful to the viewers if that when a certain part is being spoken of, give it a brief flash, or an outline so it's easier to spot.
Also, a next button so the audience doesn't get to overwhelmed by the information being given to them.
Overall, for an educational flash, I'd say that it is okay, and passable. Though I'm no science guy, noooooope.
it BURNS! good though
not bad informitive but i wonder where newgrounds will put it
10 for the idea...
... I'm assuming you'll make another version with animation for each step?
Thanks for the review,i won't make an animation for each step as this was done for school,i know it is not that great but i'll be doing better.
An old storyteller enters a city with nothing but the stories he wishes to pass on...
Reaper uses his ultimate as it should be.
GwainSaga - (Original Serie)
newgrounds.com — Your #1 online entertainment & artist community! All your base are belong to us.