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Hello guys. It's been a while since i contribued anything to the Portal. And to massacre the monotomy of this ''while'', i made this! Enjoy!
Wow the drawing here is amazing. You just need to work some more on adding some colours and a little sound and it would be a hit for sure.
I like the style
and I personally think if you were to add colour, try to not go overboard? I like the sketchy, rough lines, and i don't think they'd stand out as much if there was a busy coloured background.
Sounds effects/audio, definitely. You seem to have a good few other animations going on, perhaps link them together to form a short story. Good work.
the crack of the cliff is too far from where the liquid dropped.
not too bad anyways.
It was pretty interesting
You have something good here but it only looks the start to a project that could be made much better, not saying it's bad at all though.
You should add more onto the story, clean up the animation, add a background, maybe color etc. I know this is a side project but it could turn into something big.
Thanks for the support!
Well hey hey
This is a nice little experimental animation.
BUTTTTT it would be wise to at least put music, or maybe sound effects in it. That would increase its entertainment level tonnnnsss just by doing that.
Thanks for giving me hints!
A starving village ask a water spirit to help them.
Strawberry clock forgets his ticket on the train but maybe he'll be ok
a clock day story
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