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The Misterious Cliff

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rated 2.73 / 5 stars
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Genre:
Drama
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boy
cliff
eagle
tear

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Uploaded
Apr 28, 2010 | 8:20 PM EDT

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Author Comments

Hello guys. It's been a while since i contribued anything to the Portal. And to massacre the monotomy of this ''while'', i made this! Enjoy!

Reviews


GagaManMusicGagaManMusic

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

awesome drawing

Hi,
Wow the drawing here is amazing. You just need to work some more on adding some colours and a little sound and it would be a hit for sure.
5/5



sweetandsourchickensweetandsourchicken

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

I like the style

and I personally think if you were to add colour, try to not go overboard? I like the sketchy, rough lines, and i don't think they'd stand out as much if there was a busy coloured background.

Sounds effects/audio, definitely. You seem to have a good few other animations going on, perhaps link them together to form a short story. Good work.



manuelberjamanuelberja

Rated 4 / 5 stars

but

the crack of the cliff is too far from where the liquid dropped.
not too bad anyways.


GreatPowerfulTrixie responds:

Thank you!


BoshansStudiosBoshansStudios

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

It was pretty interesting

You have something good here but it only looks the start to a project that could be made much better, not saying it's bad at all though.

You should add more onto the story, clean up the animation, add a background, maybe color etc. I know this is a side project but it could turn into something big.

Good luck


GreatPowerfulTrixie responds:

Thanks for the support!


TheFabsTheFabs

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Well hey hey

This is a nice little experimental animation.

BUTTTTT it would be wise to at least put music, or maybe sound effects in it. That would increase its entertainment level tonnnnsss just by doing that.

kay! BYE

---THEFABS

:]


GreatPowerfulTrixie responds:

Thanks for giving me hints!