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Hooray for a first submission! Apologies for the lack of sound and, you know, the overall crap quality... I'm fairly new at this...
Anyway, hope you enjoy it, nonetheless! ^_^
just add some hardcore music, and it is 10/10!
Nice animation. I like it.
-Animation was smooth
-Art was well drawn, the black and white was a nice touch to the style, I like the floating limbs and head
-Story was funny
-No sound effects/music (If you don't know how to import it/start the sound/stop the sound, etc. Send me a message)
Pretty much the only thing that made it go down in score was that there was no music. You have a nice style and everything, however. I look forward to your future submissions.
Yeah. That's what I'm talking about. Good start for a first submission. Didn't let me down.
Interesting Until The End
The ending was highly anti-climactic and non-creative. I found it interesting up until then.
slap some sound on this and it could be pretty decent
A starving village ask a water spirit to help them.
Strawberry clock forgets his ticket on the train but maybe he'll be ok
a clock day story
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