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Just a short little fable about a mouse and a lion
I apologize...but my response is: "Meh." I shrug my shoulders. It wasn't that great, the voices were realistic enough, and it seemed like an attempt at black humor. It just...wasn't well executed.
Pretty to look at, I'll give you that. But, where's the humor?
I don't mind the length of a flash but was it a theme you were going for of how sarcasm can get you into an unfortunate mishap? If you were, then sorry for the misunderstanding.
Though, the voice acting did not appeal to me at all especially the lion. Somehow, the lion was just plain annoying to hear, constantly moaning and groaning about a splinter in his paw.
Nothing much to say but alright, I guess. It just doesn't work out with me.
Cute concept... little abstract, but hey that's what makes things funny. Really, what made me give a low score was the voices, they were unfitting for the circumstances, except the last line. That really fit in.
you get five for the animation
the animation was cool...but damn that was stupid and pretty lame...you should work on your jokes...but keep up...
Solid art, lackluster delivery
I loved the cartoony art style, but was put off by the poor concept, ho-hum voice overs, and lack of comedic timing.
It's time for Rifftrax...
Detective Nwar and his partner Blanche might as well investigate a water crisis.
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