Awesome flash! I hope the next one is just as sweet. Nothing more need be said on my end that others haven't already covered.
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WATCH PART 2 : /portal/view/599188
This is one of my firt flashes, i started working on it long ago as a kid, as you might have guessed from the graphics, but eventually i got better, even though you'll only see it if you watch the second part of this flash, which i am currently working on...
The story is real simple and candid as anyone would expect a kirby story to be, it is mostly about kirby making a friend and then trying to avenge his death... I know it is quite juvenile but it turns out to be quite entertaining in the making.
Hope you enjoy it, sequel might come out soon
cool
nice going, in the end especially hope to see the shift in improvement in the sequel again
Not bad
The graphics weren't really good, but i can see the improvement thorough the flash, i'm giving you a 10 for encouragement, hoping the second part will follow the improvment i noticed
nice work nontheless
good
it was good, What it misses?
scenes selector plays movie without music.
lack of sounds! - the biggest miss here.
graphics is very simple tho some things looks awesome for example when Kirby thrown a star it looked cool.(i mean the one that killed lots of guys)
That's a lotta Waddledees. And they're angry.
A lot of it kept the spirit of Kirby, and the rest of it was more of "if Kirby were a badass". You could see the quality greatly improve over the course of the movie (especially close to the end). Very nice, can't wait for the sequel.
(One thing to note for the sequel, if it matters, is that Kirby DOES have a lot of other enemies aside from Waddledees (obviously). Perhaps you could throw in some variety?)
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Daily 3rd Place April 27, 2010
