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Enjoy, it's my first so lemme know what to fix and what to keep in and what I should work on and stuff. ;)
I was at the credits and didn't know that the movie had even started yet, It was just a black background and a couple of people doin some crap, it could have been good if it actually had a STORYLINE the text at the start made me think it was gonna be good, seriously it could have been awesome.
OK so next time: Storyline, Obstacle, and all that other crap thats meant to be in a good movie.
Very Short, but good.
I liked it. The start was deeeeep. Maybe add a little plot to another one.
Other than that, this was pretty good.
for your first its pretty good
here are a couple things you need to work on.
1) there is no plot... all the animation is basically just portraits of character
2)after the beginning text you need to fade the music out.
3)the text is longer than the animation itself
keep trying and you'll figure it all out
the main reason i voted this up is for the kanye piano piece
that n***a kanye is whats up
but the animation was good...well enough for what happened, but i was disappointed overall... it led up to a good story but then nothing happened, it just showed the characters...
this would be a good intro to a series but i dont like that nothing happened
uh ots ok
its good animation but im not relly like that much but its still ok
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