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When I started this i was just screwing around to see what I would get. I showed it to my freinds on Fluidanims and they inspired me to finally finish it.
I am currently working on extendting this after the high response rate of "It seems just a little short"
So i will make the newer one a seperate version.
i love the video, but i can tell that you procrastinated. amirite?
Nice idea, but it was a bit short. You should expand on it and make it better :D
you should honestly make this into a kick ass game!
Once i can learn some AS2 and make a game that is decent, I hope i can.
Great idea there dude!
To much to write here...
If i were a real critic and an asshole i would say a 1/10 Because its an unoriginal concept, Bad characters, short and you didnt take much time to put alot of work into it.
Though becuase for some strange reason i like it and im going to give you a 5/10
Ya need it to be longer, if ya did and did a good job at it, I couldn't see why this wouldn't make front page.
The music went well with this flash and I liked the concept, but like I stated, it needs to be longer ya know
Other then that, great job dude
Wow you really think this can get front page?
I would love if that could be done...Yea I'm definitly giving it my all on extending this.
Thank you for the great review!
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