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This is a Cartoon Film I'm working on this is part 1, part 2 will come out May 28th,
I'm still working on the part 2 of this film and there could be a part 3. Hope you enjoy the part 1 of the film The Perfect Game.
Not the best, but it could have been worse.
Well, how do I put this without sounding like an asshole. It wasn't too good. The animation could use a lot of improvement, especially the walk cycles. And when he bowled that strike at the beginning, it would have looked a lot better if each bowling pin was animated individually. And when the Ferrari pulled up next to the kid, you should have made it so that the wheels were spinning. The artwork was actually fairly good at times, like the backgrounds and the car. However, there was also a lot of ugly-looking artwork, like the inside of the bowling alley. The voices also didn't sound very good. They were really quiet, and they all sounded the same. But, given the fact that you did them all yourself, I'll give you a break there. Maybe practice a little and invest in a higher quality microphone. Also, try using a few more sound effects and a little music. Don't give up, I can tell you have potential. Try to do the best you can, keep practicing, and you may end up making something really good someday.
i agree with druidtton
the animation was great but yes the voice acting wasnt the best. doing a collab with a voice actor would be great keep doing this and i cant wait for the second part
Animation is great, but you might consider working on a collab with a voice actor.
Could have been better
All the voices were the same. Maybe you should get some friend's in to do other voices. The voices were also too quiet, which made me turn up the speakers, only to be blasted by loud music during the credits.
Animation wasn't too bad, although the skittles could have toppled better.
Plot wasn't altogether too bad. Some people have grudges for the wrong reasons. I'll keep an eye out for part two. I just hope it doesn't turn into one of those epic battle things.
Get the voices sorted, and I think you're onto a winner.
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