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My first non-stickfigure cartoon
The inconsistency of the animation bugged me a little, the changing between crude sketch and drawn rectangles just didn't work for me, the whole lot in crude sketch like in the guy's room would have been better. The story itself was set up nicely, mirroring closely to a classic teen movie. Excellent work for a first non-stick movie.
The drawing was a bit messy and the animation was choppy, but not too bad. The voice acting just after the preloader was awful, I hope it won't be like that for the entire series.The sound stopped for a few seconds just before he reached the liquor store, I don't know if it was meant to or not. I'd recommend that you practice using flash before you release the series, it could be quite good.
The animations weren't the best, but the way you builded up the movie, reminds me abit of a start on a normal movie, like american pie or such. So great work!
Speech was a bit too quiet.
It's time for Rifftrax...
Detective Nwar and his partner Blanche might as well investigate a water crisis.
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