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Apr 24, 2010 | 3:06 AM EDT

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My 1st attempt at horror films. you could see it wasn't too successful. I just hope that it dosen't get deleted or something. But good thing is, nobody will have dreams at this one! :) Now updated with scary music

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JJYangJJYang

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

Slow...

The movie was somewhat slow-paced, almost as if you were merely trying to increase the running time for the sake of increasing it. It'd be nice if it moved a little more quickly.
The text was also difficult to read at some points. You could change its colour, or add a contrasting border around it to make it clearer.
But it's nice to see effort put into the background detail. Good luck in any further flashes!



GurzociurloGurzociurlo

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Zillazillo, how scary!!!

I'm all wet!


ericzillazillo responds:

please, notice the "horror" in quotation marks. It wasn't intended to be scary, I guess...


HMG-Mk-IIHMG-Mk-II

Rated 2 / 5 stars

Not sure.

Given you're first attempt at a horror film, i chose to ignore the drawing quality, and focus on the horror side of it. The music sounds as if it's self-composed on a keyboard, and had a little too much timbre for my liking. The narrative was a little difficult to read sometimes, perhaps a black box at the bottom would have been better. From what i read of the story, i feel it would have been better left as a text only feature.


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NowRahNowRah

Rated 1.5 / 5 stars

Didn't mind it

Be careful what colour you make the writing though, a few times it was the same as the background and couldn't be read.

On a whole, it needs a lot more too it.


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