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you got somehin good here.

been a while since I have been a able to see your next Flash.

This one is better than the Bat. Which means you're improving!

The audio is fair. But audio can be a pain to work with at times so it's fairly good for voicing. awesome on the French btw. there aren't many Flashes done in a foreign language.

The animation transitioning and the camera movement have gotten better.
definably more structure involved than the last. in your case, it looks like you put allot of time like you said into this and show improvement. looking forward to the next Flash!

the quality of the Flash, as always, needs work (like limb movement) which can be super tedious. but it's getting better! keep at it!

Not bad

Not bad at all, you speack french better than a lot of people I saw before^^ Certainly some errors on the verbs^^
Otherwise, the animation wasn't so bad, but could be better :)

PS: for the Anime thing, it doesn't exist in french so I guess you mean something like "Dessin animés" ^^
PS2: Yeah, I'm french ^^;

Not too bad

I feel that given a free reign though, you could have done a lot more with it. Why didn't you pick an exciting day that didn't involve walking to the bathroom? It could have given you the opportunity to learn lots of new exciting French vocabulary like dragon, emperor, knight, hero, yoga or tap dancing. It also would have made the movie a little more interesting to watch, as well as furthering your French past dress, undress, sleep and watch anime =P I understand you had to do it for school though, so you had limits. However, I'm not reviewing it for school work. I'm reviewing it for newgrounds.

I realise you didn't have much time to make it, but it does seem like that. The whole thing seems pretty rushed, and the quality of drawing was poor. The sound balance was well done though. You could always hear your speech over the music which was good.

Finally, I know you asked people not to mention it, but your French pronunciation was... well... really, really bad. You sounded like an American just saying French words as though they were English. I'd recommend using a French online dictionary and listening to the way they pronounce individual words and trying to mimic it. Or maybe if you have some sort of old recorded listening test that you could borrow from your school and try to mimic. I know it's difficult, but the French really hate people butchering their language. (Plus, even if you don't know what your saying, you sound like you know more if your accent is good).

Excellent

Not the most spectacular animation I have ever seen, but I like this work because someone to make a plot rather than rely on visuals for quality entertainment. That and there are not enough foreign language works around here. Good job