In a word "crap"
This is not good. The voice acting is crap. The humour is crap. But... it is your first so.... a five from me for decent animation. But please stop it looping!
Author Comments
this is a revised edit of my FIRST EVER FLASH ANIMATION! so pardon me if it sucks more than fred.
zwii responds:
thnx, I've been getting help from my friend about flash, so (hopefully) I'm getting better. :)
lolwut
Absolutely terrible, wasn't funny at all. Work on your voice acting and animation. Also, it keeps repeating.
Good...
Well... for a "First Flash" it's good... Keep doing more, you will get better ^^
But I really don't laught at it, anyway mario voice is funny =P
zwii responds:
thanks, I'm planning on getting better (hopefully)