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Would like to make a series out of this... this is my first official submission to NG so I hope you guys like it TY and make sure to review... Thnx again.
Well, this is not in anyway to get even for my poor rating, I enjoy constructive criticism
Well for one this video is even shorter than mine,
Two the effects sound cheesy, and looks the same,
Three, this video makes absolutely no sense, why would shadow attack sonic for no good reason, and sonic never responded,
Four Very confusing
But I do like the text style and music
Tip: In the future do what I did, create other animations, but not to publish, but to see if it runs smoothly, and practice using flash alot, it is harder when you learn the advanced techniques like blurs, motion tweens, etc.
Thank you for your review!!
Yes I have to admit this is no where near my best work but i dont give up easy. I have been practicing sketching and making effects on my own.
There was no plot, character development, or even proper ending but i just wanted to see how well this would do. I have started using flash again recently and will continue to do so.
I appreciate the positive feedback and look out for my latest flash soon!!
Thank You once again!!
I won't blam...
...Cos it was ok... It was decent for a first try. Much better than some stuff i have seen. A five from me. But like pulluxNG said, experiments are not aprecciated here. But I think you can do better! :) Go for it!
Yea Yea i am a noob but the same reason for not saying that i am is my reason for doing it. This is NG and as sad as it might be it is the top flash community in the best of my knowledge. Thank you for replying and believeing in me... I won't let you down... I promise.
Good for a first flash!
Considering this is your very first flash and considering that you are a beginner, this is not bad! But demo's and tests aren't much appreciated. Please submit the whole thing next time. You did great if this was your first flash, so keep this up and you'll get better in time!
Yes like i said for the guy bellow i didnt expect this to be a hit. Since i am a begginer i learned of NG Alpha after actually going through the trouble of fixing it. Its the kind of personality I have. If I see something that i feel is wrong i will try to out do myself which I did if you replied like I wanted. Thanks for watching It means a lot to me.
Oh yea and patience is underated. Some people dont understand how much patience it takes to make something decent so thank you for taking that in mind also.
ummmmmm... i guess this is okay if it was your first. Very short and pointless though. Choice of music was fine, need more action so. Eh. But lacking at best.
Well the thing is I can't start with a 5 star hit and I know it... If im going to get good its going to take practice and thank you for the constructive critism... It helps =]
Going back, one last time...
Detective Nwar untangles a massive copycat kidnapping conspiracy.
Joel runs out of shivs. Surley Ellie is not carrying anything that'll help him
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