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My First Submission To Newgrounds I dont care if it doesnt look good im still learninq as i go
Did you post a preview of this on The Spritas!
I feel like I have seen this. Are you from The Spritas! because I think that is where I saw this.. XD
for your first time it isnt too bad
but just so you know on the first thing that goku said he said what twice so instead of "what do you want vegeta" he says "what do you what vegeta"
but the sound loops so you might wanna fix that
but otherwise good job =]
A few things are broken.
You did say that you were going to work on the quality of the movie itself, and that I leave up to you.
However, I'd like to point out a few problems right off the bat that you should try to get fixed:
- It appears as if the whole movie's not within the frame.
- The loading button seems to be covered up partially by a sprite. Some of the text to the left gets cut off.
- there's no 'play' button; the movie starts by itself. You should probably add a 'replay' screen in there somewhere.
- Also, the last sound from the first playthrough doesn't stop when the flash restarts. Please figure out how to fix this -- it's very grating.
Pilot for my new show!
A story about a worm, a beetle and a very hungry bird…
New video for you to watch, while we wait for the next plague to happen...
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