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Apr 21, 2010 | 6:40 PM EDT

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and it is short. i'm sorry, it is. Crappy and short. =-= I'm still new to flash.



Rated 4 / 5 stars

good start

dont forget ur replay button. if u chose to stick with this u look like u have nice potential.


Rated 3 / 5 stars

pretty good

especially since youre new to flash, you kept the volumes very well and the art was pretty good too, ive dabbled in flash myself, so if you need anything, dont hesitate to shoot me a pm!
keep it up!


Rated 5 / 5 stars

bit short

Looks great, add some music and make it longer and your on to a winner

ShrimpyChan responds:

I'm still finding out how to work it, I'm new to flash.


Rated 3 / 5 stars

Well all right

You really dont want your lines to be seperated from one another, you want everything to be all one straight line. When the girl was standing up we could see how you drew her, you know the ball with the cross in it. Animation wise it was good but you didnt practice anything else such as sounds, colors, background, etc. so you're doing good so far just fix it like the reviewers tell you, practice all the other components of flash and you should be good to go :).

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ShrimpyChan responds:

Well, I'm trying to add audio, but I keep messing I'm gonna keep trying until I get it right. about the color and backgrounds...It'll take me pretty much a long time to do that, but for now, it's just sketching. ^^;;


Rated 3 / 5 stars

Not Bad

Are You Starting Out?
If You Are..
Its A good start

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ShrimpyChan responds:

Yeah, I'm still new to it. ^^; So I'm still trying to figure out how to add music and stuff like that. It's hard.