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While this animation is essentially just another madness knockoff, it's really just to gather feedback rather than stand out among the other Flash animations on this site.
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Didn't use a preloader, sorry. Might have to wait a minute or two before it loads.
Needs more loader bar, regardless. :c
In an attempt not to rate this badly, I refreshed about 3 times, just to make sure it wasn't just a blank submission. Regardless of whether or not you tell people that there isn't a loader bar, and they're gonna have to wait, I'm willing to guess that like half of the general viewers won't notice what you said, get pissed off because nothing is showing up, and rate this zero. :C
Just my humble advice, but this really needs some kind of loading screen for it to be appreciated by the general NG population.
Great animation, with that said!
Good luck next time.
Has Potential but needs work
I can't say that this flash is Front page material but it is a good start, with a bit more work put into it, (art, effects e.t.c), it can become a very popular flash....but that's just my opinion.
You could take this and turn it into a side-scrolling flash game. The animation was smooth and the animation entertaining for what it was. Didn't understand your ending though... did the big guy just jump? If you want to keep with flash movies, I'd say pick up the pace a little, the action felt a little slow. It did feel a lot like the Madness series, but that was what you were going for so that is probably a good thing. Serious potential, just needs some polishing, or turn it into a game.
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