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Man takes on a pigeon, who poops on a human statue. An animation about the Battle of Wits between man and bird.
Not too shabby for a first animation!
Next time you export a flash movie go to file > export > export movie, save it where you want. Then a box should pop up, set both the audio stream and audio event to 56kbps.
Sould make everything sound a whole lot better. :]
Sorry the animation wasn't, well, an animation. But thanks for participating!
Not too good
It was poorly written and the audio was horrible. It was too distorted. Toilet humor seems like lazy writing, if it had more jokes on top of that then the toilet jokes wouldn't have been so bad.
I know people will weigh on this and claim it's a useless review, but if you want to broaden your audience to touch more than just the people that like juvenile toilet jokes you will need to listen to your critics.
Yeah I know yer' right. It was just fun to make, not so much for the audience, but for me really. I mean, I wasn't going for juvenile, more of a silly humor. And yes the script was fairly bad, but everyone has to start at one end of the stick or the other. I thank you for giving me a 3, rather than a 0, and will take yer' advice. Thanks for the review though.
The voices are way too silent, the background is way too loud and the story is pretty juvenile. It was severely hard to even hear what was being said without blasting my speakers and then their voices where drown out by the background noise.
I'll try better next time! Yeah, I had trouble with the Background sounds, but I'll work on that. I thought it was alright though...
It really didn't have a plot that the movie was supposed to be formed around. other than that it was pretty good.
Just a silly animation! Thanks for watching!
Not bad for a first animation
Just work more on layers and it'll be amazing. I like the artwork, and voices though. Here's an 8 for inspiration!
Thanks for taking the time to review this. Yeah, first animations usually aren't ground breakers, but I was fairly satisfied just to finish it. Hope you enjoyed it!
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