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Save My Planet

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rated 2.57 / 5 stars
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Genre:
Informative
Tags:
world
environment
recycling
waste

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Uploaded
Apr 18, 2010 | 5:22 PM EDT

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Author Comments

So I was set the task of creating a flash animation that's about a minute long, i went a bit over, it's for a uni project and my first animation too.
We were given 2 months in which to make it and a website to go along with it, so don't judge me too badly please! The theme was an environmental one and it's not the first I've been given with that topic, so I tried to make it a bit more.. fun :)

Reviews


MrGUSMrGUS

Rated 3 / 5 stars

Nice try and intention

Hi there, I really like your intention with this movie, and I guess you already know some of your faults, I'll comment briefly on it anyways. The sound is a MAYOR issue, the effects are of low quality and the characters themselves have no sounds, I know that having voice actors or effects can be very complicated or just impossible (i haven't used them myself), but how about some decent background music to set a mood? There's a bunch of it on the audio portal.
About the animation, waaay too many tweens, and that wouldn't be so bad, but the movements you did with it are very unnatural, too linear and mechanic.
Details matter, for example making the fire-y head move somewhat naturally in a repeating movie clip, the same with the water head of the girl.
Keep practicing, continue your characters further, and think about what I've mentioned.

Good luck,
Gustavo M.


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X3cutionerX3cutioner

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Nice job

for a first animation it's well presented, the artwork isn't complex although it's not entirely stickmen either.

story could have a bit more input, although it was supposed to be a 1 minute movie so can't do a lot to be fair.

however the point you tried to make got across, it's a good idea, build up on it, improve your work.. you'll get somewhere with it, perhaps make a few more characters or continue the story if possible right through to the companies that destroy the natural environment to produce what we have today.

once again nice job, despite it being short, no sound, no music, little artwork.. perhaps some alterations including this would help too.



Eagle367Eagle367

Rated 3 / 5 stars

needs sound

The flash animation was good, but you needed more sound. As well aa bit more touch up with the flash but overall it was good keep up the good work



DeviBosDeviBos

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Good!

That was a nice clean movie. For your first animation it is very good! Keep up the good work. Just with the next animation try to ad music or more sound.