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Its time for the meat kids to gather meat. Their first big day hunting.
EDIT: Anyone fancy voice acting for the little girl, Pm or something.
Part A can be seen here:
this was about to get blammed but i like it and gave it a 5/5..and now its on the front page....im happy to see it on the front page cuz its AWSOME.
You saved it and now its here forever. Well done, and I will save your toon when it comes out also with my voting power.
Well, lemme see here..
You've earned the score, 2/10
The animation was terrible, their mouths moved like a old dubbed kung fu movie. There was no real story at all, why were they going to get meat? were they starving? I don't get it.
Also, the jokes was nonexistant, the only voice acting was bad enough to be bad, not bad enough to be funny. Had you cut out the annoying whining little girl and the retarded self sacrifice of the animal that could have brutually crushed the girl and eaten her instead. Seriously, add that instead. Anyway, had you cut that out.
To make a long story short, this movie clip makes me nerd rage. Seriously, video games doesn't make you violent, terrible drug influenced flash creations make you violent.
Hopefully this one gets blammed soon enough.
Self sacrifice? The bull murdered a separate cow and clearly it wanted to use her to rid the world of her father.
Also, Lmao I hope you kill lots of people over this movie. Since its never gonna get blammed.
not a fan
this isn't an awful stick fight, thank god for that, but i didn't really find myself a fan of this movie.
i will back up my opinion with reasons as well, so here you are:
first i did not really like your animation. i am not saying that because the style was experimental, or because of not understanding the images, no. really there was just a lack of movement and life. The characters limbs barely moved, even when opening a door, that just looks bad. Mostly you seem to have produced a slide show of still images.
now i know many animations are big on talking and not too large on graphic intensive actions, but in that case most of the time, the line work is done well and the mouths are at least attempted to be in sync with the words. those two aspects are something i did not see in your work. the mouths moved spastically, and confused. the mouth moved like a spam animations might.
the voice acting, i did not find myself liking either. yes it did have a bit of a david firth (salad finger, burt face man (sorry if i misspelt his name)) lethargy to it, but his works for a humorous effect. your voice acting in my view came out as being lazy, and badly done. i apologize if this was not the case, but that is what i heard.
finally the design work could have used a good deal more work to me. The main characters didn't even look the same from scene to scene. the color work was also decently bad. now true i understand that being done in your own style the color work is done your own way, but there is a good deal of white space that is simply too white. although, yes, the white space can be used to a good effect, here it just makes the viewer confused. you cannot tell one background from another and all of the negative space looks very boring from the audiences view point.
i am critiquing this not to be mean, but i watched episode A and i could see that, during the bite scene, you do have the skill and ability to do much better than i saw with this.
congratulations on completing this , i myself have not completed anything in over 3 years, so i commend you on that,
but if you could, i would like to see better
personally not a fan,
but good luck in the portal,
keep on trying,
the mega god
Okay you're reasonable enough (I actually read this wall), I dont see why I should put weeks of effort into something that was a couple of short skits. The movie is a bit of fun, its inspired by spam movies, B movies, and folks like Slintas who can send out massive amounts of work in short periods of time. You yourself shouldnt either if you make anything again that is a quick twisted joke, a fair amount of people might get a kick out of it.
The rest of the people it annoyed would still have been annoyed and offended by it, if it had been polished to death. I hae another movie on here (in two parts) called Sofuz which is another twisted story (albeit polished) and doesnt have double the amount of bookmarks this has.
I cant see a better argument than that. Also this is an improvement over episode A), imo.
This animation is... tops
The only film more disturbing than this is Holy Mountain. Which George Harrison turned down because of the "anus washing" scene.
I need to see Holy Mountain. I know all about it though, just need to get back to my real home with unlimited bandwidth.
The animation was definitely unique, the voice acting was actually pretty hilarious, and the story was... interesting. Remember kids, whale meat > patricide.
Seriously though, I thought Newgrounders LIKED the bizarre...
Try 5-6 years ago. Also thanks.
A look at the first day of Lucina in Super Smash
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