Smooth and quick

~~REVIEW~~
First off i must say this was cute, and the animation was very smooth in animation, it did lack in color and backrounds, so these are a few things that could be worked on, like adding some backrounds or maybe even just a color backround would sufice, adding abit of color would be neat like when the one girl pulls out the gun and shoots you could have the bullets "RED" or "BLUE" something that shows a differant color, pretty much after that scene though it ends, so it does need some more content, you should add other characters that come into play and with more little battles, other then that it was pretty good.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
needs more content, some touch of color, and abit more stuff going on, also some backrounds wouldnt hurt

~~OVERALL~~
A cute fbf short flash

~X~

Choppy, but was fun too I guess.

Choppy, drawings were incosistant but I liked it for what it is.

I peaked through your profile and am completely baffled how "plea" got a lower mark and less views, anywho keep on goin' :)

i liked it

it was kinda shaky like everyone mentioned, but that too me added to it's coolness. and it has been proven that a sword would beat a gun so theres some fact in here too :P

Shaky

very very very very shaky, and it lacked force, well drawn and pretty decent but yes, its to shaky and needs force

I demand this on the front page!

It was really cool, and it really looks that you spent time on this. 5/5, 10/10