Vegetas Vengeance
Author Comments
UPDATE: I am currently attempting to finish the second part of this. But also I plan to upgrade this one by the end of the week. But just so every knows I am trying to improve on all request. So enjoy this version and hopely the second part and the re-cut part on this one will be added.
Sorry if its abit messy but this is something i began last year i was working hard on and just got on and finished for a release. I did mess up badly on the blast i am aware also maybe the text move abit fast if any mistakes are noticed please freedom of expression is always in order. Ive been a DBZ fan for years now so i'm defiantly a die hard fan. So please enjoy and maybe some of you can give me better outlook on better kameha's and such. :) NOTE: Credits where given at the end of this flash so the only thing i should have any over is animating it myself, no sprites sounds or music belong to me thank you and hope you enjoy.
Reviews
Rated 3.5 / 5 stars April 12, 2010
spelling was crap, animation was good
Yeah, I'm being a grammar nazi too... try putting the script through a word processor or getting someone else to proofread it before you submit it (or both!).
But the animation was pretty good though. I'm a bit of a die-hard fan too - next one a big fight between ssj King Vegeta and ssj2 Gohan? And I guess Piccolo would help cos he always helps Gohan out...
(and who started calling supersaiyans ssj? I'll have to look that one up...)
Rated 2 / 5 stars April 12, 2010
So many spelling errors!
Grammar Nazi Attack!
Dad! your okay! -->Dad! you're okay!
(your as in something that belongs to you, such as: your mum, your face etc. you're as in you are, such as: you're ugly, you're bad at spelling)
de ja vue -->deja vu
sence -->sense
whers -->where's
patients -->patience
trough -->through
explosian -->explosion
knotice -- >notice