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This is a postal that i've made to a friendo that asked me to make it to his girlfriend, i finnished in 3 days so i think it was a little fast, also i'd like to tell me all the things that you would improve in my animation :)
I have to say it's pretty good. Nothing wrong in my personal opinion. BUT... there's a but LOL. The couple walk a HELL of a distance first Italy Egypt Brazil Rome wherever they go that is the worls longest road. And also strange.. The sun heads to the right in the sky and the moon heads to the left? Is the world on a DJ stand? Other than my rant nicely done and I get the message behind it I wish a lot that I could go through the computer and see my Girlfriend.
Nice ending and the spanish forced me to give it a 7 LOL.
Trying to be fair here, so I'll just say what I think needs to be said.
While the animation itself wasn't overly complicated and the art itself with some exceptions nothing too outstanding, I suppose the message of this flash is all that counted and if I interpreted it correctly it delivers that message.
However I'm not sure if the text during the chat is any relevant as I honest to god couldn't read any of it as it was very small.
Except for the visual flaws I mentioned I suppose it does it's job well as a Valentine's message (even though it's belated) and I suppose it worked on a transcendential level rather than a superficial one.
Also I happened to think the loader was quite a bit silly :P
Lol, I found something wrong...
the tape goes in the TV the wrong way...
It was good BUT the motion tweening on the buildings fadeing into the background was pretty badly done (sorry)
it was good though.(7.2)
A look at the first day of Lucina in Super Smash
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