Our Dreams
Credits & Info
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Artist PIED3
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Production Dragproductions
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Production thespazicat
- Uploaded
- Apr 11, 2010 | 4:34 PM EDT
- File Info
- Movie
- 8.9 mb
Author Comments
NOTE-May be laggy on high quality, if your pc aint great i reccomend medium.
Hey,
So this has been in the works for a very long time, a lot of effort and patience has gone into this so i hope you enjoy it! The story was originally inspired by a different song, and right untill about 2 hours ago that was the song i planned to use for the flash. But when it came to finishing it up i realised the song no longer fit and was to short (thats what happens if you dont plan carefully) so i changed it for the song you now hear instead. I think the song still fits well and sets a good mood, and i hope you do to!
CREDITS:
Dragproductions - The voice of Graham
TheSpaziCat - The voice of Jack
Nakoruru - The voice of the Mum and School Girl
Pino Donaggio - The music
A huge thankyou to all the voice actors and any comments or criticisms on how to make my work better are greatly appreciated,
Many thanks,
PIE
P.S Sorry about some of the lip synching the audio messed up and i had to put it into 1 big file so some of its out of time, hopefully it doesn't ruin the experience.
Reviews
Rated 3 / 5 stars February 11, 2012
Audio is good, but proportions is all wrong. Not a very serious flash submission here.
But 3 stars for the animating and try.
Your last two submissions were much worse.
Hey just because my anatomy sucks doesn't mean i'm not serious! But you're right, the characters do look pretty wacky... Thanks for the review.
Rated 4 / 5 stars April 20, 2010
nice little flash
I always throw my support behind flashes that aren't the highest of artistic merit drawing wise if the story has been given honest thought. The drawing wasn't even half bad either, but u may wanna work on ur lady drawings a bit.
I had to dock u 2 marks however because although the story was awesome, it has been done before on ng right down to the flying machine in a few different flashes (then again, dont worry, there are a billion Mario flashes out there).
8/10 5/5
Glad you liked, yeah the ladies arent my speciality in drawing (in life on the other hand...) And ive been working on anatomy since i finished this so expect my next animation to have good story AND good art :) Thanks for the review!
Rated 4.5 / 5 stars April 12, 2010
nice message
Animation was nice i thought, and it did keep my attention, clearly some people have the attention span of a goldfish. But i thought it was a good submission, keep up the good work, maybe work on the audio, was a bit too quiet at times, but still a fine submission :)
Glad you liked it, and yeah i agrea about the audio, might update it...
Rated 1 / 5 stars April 12, 2010
For effort
The story couldn't keep my attention at all, which was the better part of the flash. Your animation needs work...
As does your reviewing...
Rated 4.5 / 5 stars April 12, 2010
great story
while having good art and animation skills help, i think the story is what's most important. I thought the plot moved along well and was fairly easy to understand and the twist at the end was a great touch to an already good story that is easy to relate to if you have ever had a dream that nobody seems to understand.
Good to see people connect with the story, thanks for the review!