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Apr 8, 2010 | 2:45 PM EDT

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My first ever flash submission, a traditional text adventure game.

Welcome to the world of Afar. Your loved one has been captured by the evil Whild Tribe, do you have what it takes to track them down and rescue her? Run out of energy and you will surely fail, some roads lead to certain doom, but if you make the right decisions it might not be too late to save the day!

Reviews


AerenGreyAerenGrey

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars April 9, 2010

Made only one bad choice

I knew throwing rocks at them was a bad idea. Why did I do it anyway. :P I loved Choose Your Own Adventure books when I was a kid!



Tainted-TrixterTainted-Trixter

Rated 4 / 5 stars April 8, 2010

Well...

Choose your own adventure, a great way to pass some time. Without a doubt one of my favorite things from when I was a kid. Very good and very fun. I do have some suggestions however.

Primarily I could tell that effort was put into the art, but we really don't get to see it. I think it would be nice if you exposed some more of the art, maybe even added some scenes from the story.

I also noticed the story had some continuity issues. Like if you take the east path or search to start with you never meet the owl, so he shouldn't help you at the end. Also if you take the east path it behaves as though you searched the clearing. You should be able to encounter the whild tribe without knowing that you are on the right path in that case (i.e. have two different encounters.). When you wake up you should have the oprion to eat both fruit, or have something happen to the other one after you eat the first one.

I would love to see another one of these, perhaps extended with a bit more viewing of your artwork. Keep up the good work.


greyheaven responds:

Thanks for your in depth review! The issue with searching the east path was actually a bug, so I have updated the game to fix that and also tweaked the owl text a little.

I agree with all your suggestions regarding making the game more graphical, adding some scenes from the story is a great idea ! I have picked up a few tricks in flash making this little game and I hope to take them forward and produce something better! :)


yodaman132yodaman132

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars April 8, 2010

Interesting

I like the story telling. I haven't played a game like this in a while.

Thanks for the experience.


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Katgirl900214Katgirl900214

Rated 4 / 5 stars April 8, 2010

Pretty Cool :)

Nice story, but it was kinda short. My one suggestion is more pictures. I checked out your website and I think you could do a way better game than this one.


greyheaven responds:

Thank you, very kind of you to say! I hope to make my games more graphical as I improve with Flash, hopefully you will come back and check them out!


PacificNoobPacificNoob

Rated 3 / 5 stars April 8, 2010

Awww

I am so cute...
Pretty nice story, more I don't have to say :D