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temptation got the better of gandalf
the graphics are ok, but the actual animation needs works. As coop83 said, you need to proof read your piexe before publishing.
if i was you i would buy a better microphone (or speak clearer and louder).
a bit longer .O.K. Peace out.
ive actually got the best mic money can buy exulding studio equip but there thousands, its just when i import the WAV files into flash the qulity drops alot for some reason, i dont know how other people have such good qual voice acting,
Could use better voices
It's certainly not a bad piece, but I think that you do need to give the piece a good proof read, before publishing the piece (Bilbo's ring, the apostrophe means a lot) and then perhaps getting all of the finer details sorted should be the best option.
From there, I'd say that you could do with getting the voice acting just a little louder and perhaps just a little more fluid, but it's a good effort.
When it comes to the delivery of the punchline, it could have been set up better, by having a longer build up and some sort of atmosphere before delivering Frodo's come on. I think that even though most people have seen those first scenes from Fellowship, it still needs a little more to make the picture fit the cause.
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I liked the ending.
... but keep at it!
Not that good...
The voices weren't always clear.
The animation overall is too short.
It's not that funny.
Sorry man, but you've got to work harder on these.
guy drains his main vein.
The first episode of my original anime
Two Men Fight to the Death!
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