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3rd episode but its very very short and it took me the longest? Weird
but not much of an episode. Each episode should tell a reasonable amount of story and, depsite any encouragement you give (not enough in your case) to watch the previous episodes, should stand on its own as a story to some extent. This one doesn't.
Quick wins- get rid of the white edges at the beginning/intro. You can't see them when you are making it, but they must NOT be there in the finished product.
I've remembered the spelling error now- its Macromedia and it belongs to Adobe anyway now.
Really you should junk that scribbly green fbf intro that looks WAY too childish for your work.
Your work suffers from not being properly Beta'd before submission. PM me and I will help you, I can also get my Crew, the Dragons & Spirits, plus the Wikigrounds team to beta stuff before you face Judgment. The trouble with NG reviews is by the time you get them you have already been through judgment!
Such a shame that you have so few reviews here- if you hit the blue score, you will get more views and reviews- people should be giving hard work like this more support.
The voices were horide, but the animation was go.
Xavas Live Visual Animation
Harry Episode 2 - Flashbacks
"They Took His GIRL. Now He'll take their SOULS!"
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