Great

OBVIOUSLY this had no plot. But I thought it was pretty great since this was your first one. A lot better than mine.

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it ok but there is no plot

I'm impressed.

This is a huge step forward from what you were submitting the other day. If you keep advancing at this level you'll be a well known name around here very soon. Good luck and keep up the good work. Your style is very nice, too.

borderline

Very good animation, and art, reminiscent of Chluiad; nice idea to a point.

Needed a little more- a little sound, or just something at the end making a bit more point to it - more interest or entertainment. If the blob only smiled at camera at the end, it would make more sense of it- its mistrust ending on close examination of the viewer, say. In fact, if you would be kind enough to make it do that, I would be pleased