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please dont rate it down coz i used pivot in some of it. I hope you like it.
The animation was smooth. However, get some weapon .stks to use instead of drawing them yourself. Guns are hard to draw in Pivot. And get hold of some more sound effects. I reccomend a site called finsdounds.com. If you have any PC games, try to rip sounds from them.
The Pivot animating is nice and smooth and the sound effects were on sync. It was okay for a first Flash.
Its a good start, animation is nice and smooth, but i have one quarrel, are you sure you did this in flash? cuz it looks alot like a pivot animation.
Definitely a good start.
Animation was smooth although there wasn't alot of it. Adding more actions like having one guy run towards the guy hiding behind the crate or more hand to hand combat would be nice. I'm not a huge fan of sticks, but if you pull it off right you can please the right audience. The guns were done well although the sound effects weren't exactly right. A sound for each action of the gun would sound great and also different noises for the gunshot itself.
Overall, a good start. Make this longer and better, add to it and when you think you're done try to improve it some more, but don't go overboard.
Good for starting, but not for NG.
Good motion, the movie didn't go by ridiculously fast, it's good. But to my standards, it's not good for NG, just yet. Add more backround, make the movie a slight bit longer, and you should be good to go.
If this does get past and onto the portal, congratulations, the majority thought this movie is good enough for NG.
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