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Apr 7, 2010 | 1:59 AM EDT

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first go at making a game.. first bit of animation ive done in aaagggeesss also!! drawing is rushed because I didn't think I'd be able to do the script... turns out I did so yeah drawings pretty poor.
please only leave CONSTRUCTIVE critisicm! it's imperitive for the growth of my ego. x

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IzmotionIzmotion

Rated 0.5 / 5 stars April 7, 2010

hm...

Just being your first game shouldn't be reason enough tu put this on the net. When you make a game, and if you think the game is actually something good and playable, give it to your friends to test it out. Get some feedback from there, because if you just post useless crap, you won't get any specific feedback, just the usual: "better graphics" or "you suck".
Personally, what i really like in RPGs is the storyline. Of course, the graphics do matter, and the gameplay does too, but those 2 without a good storyline would just give a strategy game, or something like that.
Try harder, make more games, before you actually post them. And, if you eventually become famous through your flashes, then you can make a collection of crappy games that you did when you started off . :p


thebradshaw responds:

good point lol only really uploaded it so I could link it to someonf on facebook though =S my bad.


badkiller222badkiller222

Rated 1.5 / 5 stars April 7, 2010

4 hours? really now....

It's a very nice first try, but dude, it's still a bad game. and I finished it in a minute and a half, not 4 hours.


thebradshaw responds:

yeah that was a joke lol


drackmoredrackmore

Rated 1 / 5 stars April 7, 2010

lets hope

lets hope this does not get killed because a few help full advice to a bad game
1)im going to say it GRAPHICS yes you state your graphics are poor but still just throwing that out there.
2)the sound could be better.
3)you need more enemies and more screens.
4)you need to make him move faster
5)personal question,What is with the guy loseing his head after he falls?

all-in-all im going to go for a zero for now BUT, remake it improve it give it an actual story some more sound more upgrades then i will come back and rescore it. sd for potential for once i can't really say
3 stars for sound but -1 stars for the combination of all the bad things

my thoughts as a player= try again better luck next time
as a newgrounder= i don't care that this is your first piece Blamm this piece of crap
but yes i did take into account that this was you first but even then this pales to a FEW of some peoples first


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thebradshaw responds:

thanks x


Caboose758Caboose758

Rated 2 / 5 stars April 7, 2010

meh

it sucks, more or less, I: understand its your first game though and that is usually the case in a first game. Like you said, the animation was poor, It made no sense, the only posititive thing I can say about this game was the fact that It was hard for a 3-4 section game...... damn arrows.


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thebradshaw responds:

thanks I will add more arrows


SignipathSignipath

Rated 0.5 / 5 stars April 7, 2010

WTF

I can see how this can be 4hours of game play b/c you walk so damn slow. But I like your ideology on the game. The first guy is almost impossible to get through, so I suggest making a larger time space between each swing, as for the rest of the game, I couldn't see b/c I couldn't get past the first dude.


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