Its notbad

~~REVIEW~~
Hmm ok a nice little animation you have, the size was starting to get abit on the large side but it was worth the wait i thought, i think your "MENU" screen could use some spicing up maybe give it some borders and frames and maybe even a better "PLAY" button but for the mostpart there it was ok, Nice detail like the girls shirt "MUFFIN TOPS" hehe that was pretty funny, as for the art, you have some smooth looking characters and art, some "SUBTITLES" would be a nice addition in this little flash of yours, you have presented us with some pretty good humor on this, some funny jokes and even funnier dialog, this was a good flash was not too short and not too long and as i said about improving on the menu screen you can do abit of the same of the "END" menu screen, the "FONT" could be changed aswell, anyways good work here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The menu screen where the play button is could use some spicing up maybe some borders/frames and maybe an actualy play button besides just the word play, also some subtitles could be added as a nice option to the viewers,

~~OVERALL~~
A good flash here with some funny humor and good characters i enjoyed it

~X~

Funny

I liked the old art better. This is lacking shading and I liked the brush style better than the line style.
I haven't watched your stuff since Fred a la Mode in 2007. I was just checking through my favourite artists and found you guys, good stuff. I'll be sure to watch the stuff from 2006, too.

not bad but not great

animation is great but the story and humor are a bit strange

kinda dry humor

the animation is alright, and the voicing is good, but the humor is just really dry and boring. There's isn't much going on here...

Excellent story

This was Funny, right through the whole animation. the animation was good. so were the voices.
Such a strange Idea, but performed well. I would say. How long did this take to make?

I don't know what else you could have made better. Great work. :)