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I.... guess that i may be wrong in some parts... because i am not so good with the English
this was fine, the thing it's that you need to work a litle more with the plot and more jokes, it becomes a litle boring at the end.
Traduccion: estuvo bien en general, pero necesitas trabajar mas con el guion y orientar los chistes, se vuelve un poco aburrido y predecible al final, pero por lo demas esta bien. 2.88
Though the ending was a bit lacking - he could`ve said something witty or something.
The main joke was kind of predictable but the execution in it was what made it good.
Going back, one last time...
Detective Nwar untangles a massive copycat kidnapping conspiracy.
Joel runs out of shivs. Surley Ellie is not carrying anything that'll help him
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