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The Deli

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rated 3.31 / 5 stars
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Genre:
Comedy - Original
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Uploaded
Apr 4, 2010 | 12:19 AM EDT

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Author Comments

Well this was something I wanted to make for a long time now. Finally got the 1st episode done, It was ruched a little bit but the next one will be better. This is pretty much based upon me back when I worked in a Deli. Some things through out the episode is real and over exaggerated (to add to the humor) Maybe in the future I will bring a video camera to the real deli and show you what I mean, til then this is what I got!

Reviews


BimmyKokeBimmyKoke

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Funny!!

i cant speak to the animation because i dont know the first thing about it however i can speak to the comedy, and it is first class top notch stuff, the part with the gay pink shirt thing, notice i say thing not human..... well that part made me LOL my face off. Keep up the fine work.



SailorPoisonSailorPoison

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Interesting work

You got great promise. It just needs a lil work on the art. The cartoon was interesting. I went ahead and voted 5 stars for this after watching.


ThyGentleman responds:

Thank you! I know what you mean about the art and I can do better but for some reason I rushed some parts. Next one will be better.


Newer001Newer001

Rated 1.5 / 5 stars

huh

the animation wasn't that great, I've seen worse, but i've seen waaay better. i didn't like it, I didn't find it to be funny, and I didn't get it.....


ThyGentleman responds:

Are you trying to give me lines for my next episode?


0axle00axle0

Rated 3 / 5 stars

yep k

im scared to give u a bad rating cuz of the guy at the end


ThyGentleman responds:

The gay guy or my character? or the boss?


man2bearman2bear

Rated 5 / 5 stars

heh, heh...

Love it. Love the flash, love the messages....love the cynicalism....love the retarded gay critic...nice.....