H-hey, I know this guy!
I really enjoyed the flash. You have a unique charm to your animations dude. Can't wait for episode#2 to come out so I can review it.
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Super Cheese Head Adventure - Episode 1 Foiled
Here is something I made a few weeks ago for my beginning flash final. I decided to work on an animated series short of my super cheese head character I made a long time ago. I intentionally made the background just white. I'm not that great of an artist, nor am I great at animation, but i do hope to get better because I do love animating. This is my first submission, but I do not mind if you go all out in your review.
I got the music files from flashkit.com.
This doesn't have a preloader I know, but I simply wanted to make an animation I can upload to youtube. However, I will learn how to make one for future submissions.
abit random
~~REVIEW~~
This was funny, made me laugh abit, the randomness of the odd characters and random cheese and stuff at the start was neat, the character work was ok but the film lacked abit like in the backrounds, alsoyou need to add a stop action code in there so it doesnt loop over and over, anyways nice job
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
add some backrounds, my only other issue with this one would be that it would "LOOP" over and over and you could fix that easily with an action script code >> Stop-Action-Code. checkout tutorials on the newground forums if you are unsure how to do a Stop-Action-Code.
~~OVERALL~~
I thought it was neat even if abit on the random side
~X~
Hmmm... Not Bad!
I enjoyed it, although the lack of a background threw me off at first. I can understand why you made it straight white, though (I'm no artist either!), and I hope you do further your education in flash and produce more :)
Lacks a background.
I giggled at this, Mainly beacause of the way cheese head acts on the rope.
It could be better, But, Not bad for a first. :3
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3.88 / 5.00
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