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Mar 30, 2010 | 10:08 AM EDT

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First animation ever...
Obviously I need sound but it was only a college assignment and if I had the time I would have added some. I did try and get rid of the sound for the wormhole but since I'm new to flash I couldn't figure out how so I left it. It doesn't make much sense and if you can't follow it then don't worry neither can I, I just though it was funny xD. Thanks for all the comments and I'll take note of all your suggestions. :)

Reviews


OcelotlikespieOcelotlikespie

Rated 1.5 / 5 stars March 30, 2010

Not bad for a first animation.

I haven't done any myself, but if I were you I would put more time into the design of locations, characters, and the animation itself. Also, you could add sound, obviously.
Very important thing: do not use animations taken from games or such (Ex.: teleporting sequence)
But, overall, since it's your first, it's pretty good. Keep doing these, and each time you make a new one, try adding a new "feature", like, well, in this case, a Play and Stop button would be nice. Programming's a b*tch, isn't it?
Always remember: practice makes perfect.
Good luck!

- Kagekiyo -


DarthZew responds:

Thanks dude I'll take note and I'm gunna learn how to do the Play and Stop buttons.


IcyDrifterIcyDrifter

Rated 2 / 5 stars March 30, 2010

Sound??? Ever?

Decent animation for your first movie. Just needs ALOT more sound. The only thing making noise is the warp thing and it didn't last for the whole animation. With sound, this animation would be a TON better.


DarthZew responds:

As it's only a college assignment I wasn't to bothered about sound, but I could figure out how to remove sound from the wormhole so I left it because I didn't have the time.


IncendiaryProductionIncendiaryProduction

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars March 30, 2010

good idea

but could use voice acting, more sound effects, and music.



superflashyfunsuperflashyfun

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars March 30, 2010

Not bad first, more audio and story needed.

Like above, half of the time I didn't get what was going on. Maybe I'm just dumb, but I dunno. Audio would have helped, but it wasn't a bad first flash.


DarthZew responds:

Don't worry dude it wasn't supposed to make sense, it was mostly a laugh for me and my friends.


BeefJuiceBeefJuice

Rated 0 / 5 stars March 30, 2010

What the.

I think I'll be attending the theater at 2010 to laugh at this failure of a movie.


DarthZew responds:

xD I'm sure you will. It's actually supposed to be a game...