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Mar 29, 2010 | 3:57 PM EDT

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Just another project where i think i should have story boarded from start to finish. I'm just very unfamiliar with planning. but, i really liked the song. always wanted to attempt a music video, and um... it was fun. as far as some of the animation parts go, i did put alot of work into it. regrettably, at the very end it's obvious i lost interest. at some point i lost focus of what i was originally trying for. so, this is what i have, and i'm going to start another project soon.

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XwaynecoltXXwaynecoltX

Rated 3 / 5 stars

I liked it

~~REVIEW~~
This was actually a pretty decent little flash, kinda like a music video, and it shows you put some decent effort into this, the creatures were decent the animation was notbad but it needs to be more cleaner looking

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
work on smoother animation, make smoother and cleaner and maybe even slower scenes

~~OVERALL~~
A great start to something decent here

~X~



BitBit

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Very Good

I found it interesting. The song isn't bad. The animation was really good.

This has the potential to be one of the top movies on the site, if you had only taken the time to finish it.

It's your choice, but I urge you to finish this this and resubmit it.


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Skullboy79Skullboy79

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Good start, finish it!

Good song, great start to a cool concept, never seen a guy with a hand coming out of his back, that's unique. SOrry you lost interest, but just rethink it and storyboard it out on paper to see what gets your creative juices flowing again. Peace!


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CagedSilhouetteCagedSilhouette

Rated 1.5 / 5 stars

"Trial by fire"

Though to me the graphics were pretty unpleasant, you seem to be able to draw fairly well[or atleast sketch things fairly well]. You also seem like you're pretty good at frame-by-frame animation... Where you are really lacking though is the idea. A plot and thought out storyline. I had no idea what was going on here. You also seem impatient, judging by the ending. It kinda seemed like you got tired of animating it like you were, and instead, broke it down into a "sketch book style" that seemed rushed...

I personally think you could do alot better in the future.


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