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wow an animation your right guys i suck but i took a while on this one even though it has
got no guy shredding himself with a chainsaw
Like some of the ideas, voice acting was O~K may be, perhaps you should get someone else to do it lol. I really like the surreal dream, it's pretty cool. I'm also satisfied with the length: a nice short cartoon. Now here are it's week points; over dramatic lip-syncing, white background, bad audio quality, drawings, and, sorry, stolen jokes and ideas :P. Work on those, and you will become really good, perhaps may be front page one day... you certainly have capability. ;)
Also: experiments, do not submit unless something about is very, VERY, unforgivably, awesome about it. :P
that was some nice constructive critisism! :D
your animation needs a lot more work, for instance do some fixing with the animation and voices. You should also add a play/loading button so the videos doesn't keep restart/loop all the time.
i dont know how because i dont use macromedia
Do not steal your jokes.
The movie didn't make much sense, it was just some random (video game) shit. And I highly advice you: do not steal your jokes. It's obvious that you got the 'made in Britain' label in the end from Chris & Harry, as well as all the strange faces. That really dissapoints me.
yes it was i wasnt really going to have the made in britain thing but the faces were only a weird thing at the end as an experiment
Blue Pencilmate meets Red Pencilmate, but things don't go so well...
While taking the day off work, Lloyd and Glynis take in a movie
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