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My first movie in flash! If you like it, I will continue the story!
I thought it ran abit slow especially with the 3d at the starting with the city and all, you seem to have an idea here though, so keep at it and work abit more with the animation speed
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Speed up the animation with the 3d points
3d abit slow but notbad
You have a lot of potential with this. Try and work out the computers voice a little more and speed up the movie because it was pretty slow getting into anything... all in all, it was decent.
WARNING - SLOW ANIMATION DETECTED
The graphics were nice and all, but I cannot say i enjoyed the movie very much. But for a first flash, great work. Slow though...
My English is bad and I couldnt get anything from that flash(just that scanning parts)
Drawings was cool But it was Too long and Im really bored you should make shorter that the character find the zombie in that building .
5/3 and 10/8
Not bad but...
Unfortunately, the voice is muffled even with headphones. I would have preferred that you keep subtitles going since it's difficult to make out what the narrator is describing. While I understood most of it, it detracts from the atmosphere when I can't understand what someone is saying.
I would like to see more story though.
Not a bad effort and hopefully you'll do better.
Going back, one last time...
Detective Nwar untangles a massive copycat kidnapping conspiracy.
Joel runs out of shivs. Surley Ellie is not carrying anything that'll help him
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