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Mar 24, 2010 | 10:45 PM EDT

Author Comments

This is my first entry here. Weird. Thank you for the comments! I feel a lot better about my work now! I shouldn't have worried so much about the quality.

Added the preloader. Maybe now it won't loop? I hope to churn out another video soon, this one with actual content from the story itself instead of just introductions to the characters. Possibly to Frou Frou's 'Must Be Dreaming', or maybe Reel Big Fish's cover of 'Take On Me'.

This music video is a snapshot into the story that I have been working on for the past five/six years.

Reviews


SwallagoonSwallagoon

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars March 25, 2010

Awesome

Superb animation and good choice of music make this very good.
Next you should make a longer, more story driven animation.


lemonade998 responds:

Thank you! I will definitely be producing one that actually tells a story. My original plans for this one did have some story details in it, but I couldn't figure out how to tell it without dialogue, and it looked silly besides, so I cut most of it out.


jordana309jordana309

Rated 4 / 5 stars March 25, 2010

Good looking, but not production

First, I think your animation is quite good looking. Overall, this is a nice piece of work. A few things I didn't like: lack of a loading screen, and words on the screen while there are words in the song...it's a little too much to process immediatly. I look forward to seeing this story, though!


lemonade998 responds:

The loading screen has been fixed, finally. I'm sorry about the words; probably should have put them in before the music started. Thank you for reviewing!


TornadasTornadas

Rated 4 / 5 stars March 24, 2010

Go for next one!

not bat, realy not bad keep up the good work ;)


lemonade998 responds:

Thank you very much!


kjrackjrac

Rated 5 / 5 stars March 24, 2010

Wow.

This is pretty exceptional! You did a great job with the animating, and nice choice in music! Just remember a preloader next time! :)


lemonade998 responds:

I fixed the preloader. Thank you very much for the review!


ChemicalXChemicalX

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars March 24, 2010

Decent Animation

The animation is decently done. A pre-loader and an option to not have it loop when over would have garnered more stars.


lemonade998 responds:

Thank you! The preloader and making it stop at the end is fixed. I'll be sure to put that stuff in my next video.