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Mar 24, 2010 | 8:20 AM EDT

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Okay it's Very bad. when i say Very i mean it so! but Its my First try. so its all okay! :D

No music... sry hehe

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Rated 2 / 5 stars


it looks like this video might be balammed......srry :{


Rated 2 / 5 stars


I agree with what's already been said. It takes far too long, and it's really, really rigid. Make more things happen at once, and give it some appropriate sound.

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Hellje responds:

yeah i know now. at the moment i try it again, and now i hope i can it better


Rated 1.5 / 5 stars


A nice background wouldn't hurt. Anything that isn't white.
White just makes it feel so empty.

Also, the animation feels a bit stiff.
More of a PowerPoint-presentation than a Flash.
So you might want to improve the fluency?

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Hellje responds:

Oh thanks. i will Try it one more time :D.


Rated 1.5 / 5 stars


I suggest shorten the intro and make it more advanced. If you are going for an easy intro maybe try a very cartoonish flimmering look?

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Hellje responds:

Oh... yes i would try this too