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Mar 24, 2010 | 8:20 AM EDT

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Okay it's Very bad. when i say Very i mean it so! but Its my First try. so its all okay! :D

No music... sry hehe

By the way
Noyo

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Trevsky4Trevsky4

Rated 2 / 5 stars March 24, 2010

.............

it looks like this video might be balammed......srry :{



DiMonoDiMono

Rated 2 / 5 stars March 24, 2010

Meh

I agree with what's already been said. It takes far too long, and it's really, really rigid. Make more things happen at once, and give it some appropriate sound.


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Hellje responds:

yeah i know now. at the moment i try it again, and now i hope i can it better


HatsbyHatsby

Rated 1.5 / 5 stars March 24, 2010

Empty

A nice background wouldn't hurt. Anything that isn't white.
White just makes it feel so empty.

Also, the animation feels a bit stiff.
More of a PowerPoint-presentation than a Flash.
So you might want to improve the fluency?


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Hellje responds:

Oh thanks. i will Try it one more time :D.


Zeronix92Zeronix92

Rated 1.5 / 5 stars March 24, 2010

Suggestion

I suggest shorten the intro and make it more advanced. If you are going for an easy intro maybe try a very cartoonish flimmering look?


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Hellje responds:

Oh... yes i would try this too