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Cliff Diving

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rated 1.69 / 5 stars
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Genre:
Comedy - Original
Tags:
cliff
impact
legs

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Uploaded
Mar 24, 2010 | 4:12 AM EDT

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Author Comments

I finally submitted something after all this time spent lurking. Hope you guys enjoy it.

EDIT: Realized there's a few sound issues and some other minor errors, will fix those when I get back from class tomorrow

Holy hell this is still alive? Thanks guys!
Expect an extended redone, revamped version soon

Reviews


FoozogzFoozogz

Rated 2 / 5 stars

Good try

The things that appealed to me most was the disembodied head(lol) and the background. However, it was really short, and seemed rushed. The credits are longer than the actual clip, which is against an unspoken rule of animation, may wanna fix that in your upcoming projects. Also, if you don't already know this, you can fix the sound quality when you click on export movie., by clicking "Set" where it says Audio stream/event and setting bitrate higher and picking "Best" quality. Unchecking "compress movie" may help, I haven't verified that yet.


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MorbidlyCurious responds:

Yeah I know it's too short... honestly one night I just suddenly wanted to animate something and then focused too much on making the credits last for a certain portion of the song I used.

Thanks for the crit/advice!


ace14790ace14790

Rated 2 / 5 stars

Not a very well done animation

Overall, this animation is fairly poor. The art is not great and the comedy comes from a sudden abrupt intteruption followed by a message serving as a punchline. Sadly, this doesn't add up to a memorable or otherwise interesting animation.

However, keep working at it. Animation is not an easy art to master. Improve your artwork, as that's one of the more important aspects of animation. Also, either work on your writing or have someone else write for you. Once you have these two aspects nailed down, you can work on a better animation.

I hope I've been helpful, and please do not take my rating harshly. I do not do it to degrade you, but to help you improve upon your work.


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MorbidlyCurious responds:

Far from it, I appreciate the criticism!


Zeronix92Zeronix92

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

Work

You should work more with the animation and sound effects. Else the story was good, just give more work into it. When you get a new idea throw more work in animation and sound, and the ratings will fly :D



PlazmaSuthixPlazmaSuthix

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

alright

it was pretty good, but i would like it alot more if it was longer.



cloudXkurosakicloudXkurosaki

Rated 1.5 / 5 stars

the best part was the end credits

sorry mate it could have been better but i was just too short