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I finally submitted something after all this time spent lurking. Hope you guys enjoy it.
EDIT: Realized there's a few sound issues and some other minor errors, will fix those when I get back from class tomorrow
Holy hell this is still alive? Thanks guys!
Expect an extended redone, revamped version soon
The things that appealed to me most was the disembodied head(lol) and the background. However, it was really short, and seemed rushed. The credits are longer than the actual clip, which is against an unspoken rule of animation, may wanna fix that in your upcoming projects. Also, if you don't already know this, you can fix the sound quality when you click on export movie., by clicking "Set" where it says Audio stream/event and setting bitrate higher and picking "Best" quality. Unchecking "compress movie" may help, I haven't verified that yet.
Yeah I know it's too short... honestly one night I just suddenly wanted to animate something and then focused too much on making the credits last for a certain portion of the song I used.
Thanks for the crit/advice!
Not a very well done animation
Overall, this animation is fairly poor. The art is not great and the comedy comes from a sudden abrupt intteruption followed by a message serving as a punchline. Sadly, this doesn't add up to a memorable or otherwise interesting animation.
However, keep working at it. Animation is not an easy art to master. Improve your artwork, as that's one of the more important aspects of animation. Also, either work on your writing or have someone else write for you. Once you have these two aspects nailed down, you can work on a better animation.
I hope I've been helpful, and please do not take my rating harshly. I do not do it to degrade you, but to help you improve upon your work.
Far from it, I appreciate the criticism!
You should work more with the animation and sound effects. Else the story was good, just give more work into it. When you get a new idea throw more work in animation and sound, and the ratings will fly :D
it was pretty good, but i would like it alot more if it was longer.
the best part was the end credits
sorry mate it could have been better but i was just too short
Blue Pencilmate meets Red Pencilmate, but things don't go so well...
While taking the day off work, Lloyd and Glynis take in a movie
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