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Mar 23, 2010 | 4:57 PM EDT

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Val gains popularity in Shine-City and appears on the cities number 1 show - Awesome Dan!

Part 3 of 4

Wanted to get this part done faster, but turned into more work then I thought, and I had to drywall and etc. my future home which took time from this. Anyways enjoy.

Special Guest Voice Actor - Dan Purcell of http://www.bcdan.blogspot .com/ fame.



Rated 5 / 5 stars


That was fucking funny! His red suit and golden tooth! xD
Everything else was good in this part, par usual. ;)

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TheCriminalDuder responds:

I didn't know what to make him wear and glad the red suit turned out good. Thought it go good with the golden tooth and gold rings. :)
Thanks for lending your voice. I hope to see the character again in future episodes. In fact he's scheduled for the ep after this.


Rated 4 / 5 stars

Nice detail

You have something decent here the funny characters make it work, the extra color shades also make this work, aswell as the funny moments and shows you have put in some good effort for this one, so on that note nice job and make much more just like this

To improve? hmmm keep the character style make more jokes and much more humor will arise

Funny flash of characters here


TheCriminalDuder responds:

Thanks for the review.

Glad the effort shows. Ya also understand my style greatly too from what I read in this review.
I agree I need more jokes and less dialogue setting up the story more. I'll sneak more in and make it more crazy in ep 4.