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bad case of Spock-anitis

I do notice the ability to get something more grabbing, but this episode didn't leave me saying I WANT THE NEXT ONE.
I will gladly watch the second one, but it just seem to lack character emotion

I guess if he did fall asleep in a grimy bath tube, it be okay. but the fact that nothing made sence to him, tells me he didn't. but he was just monotone and like huh whats this, earthquake i guess

There was no fear or confusion. just a fan of character's and these ones seemed to monotone and not very real. but i must say the baby noise did scare me.

Feels like could be a good new series, just remember not every character is a anime keeanu reaves, make em feel real in a un-real world =D

nice, i have a few things to say

All the characters have hair styles like dragon ball Z, which is kinda lame...because its dragon ball Z. so im prove the hair a little bit.

There are too many blank spaces where nothing interesting happens or its just pure silence

The voice acting wasnt that good but i still give the voices a 9/10

The red ball was WAY out of proportion. that ball was huge, im surprised a baby(if it is) was able to push it that far outside. it looked like a medicine ball lol.

The city in the background was a little bit lame. you could atleast add stuff in the background like...a swinging sign? small chunks from a building or 2 falling down ect. and make the view of the city more cluttered or have more objects in there because you keep showing the city and there just a few buildings and thats it. you need to add more to the city.

You have to keep the viewers attention. when im focused on a movie something is always happening, in my head im thinking"omg whats that, whats happening over there? what gonna happen next."
your short chapter was filled with massive parts full of nothing. and as for the creepy guys, i want to see them! i hate just taking glimpses, i wanna see how bad ass these things are.
And its not necessary to increase the volume on the phone or anything, its kind of annoying because sometimes i can hardly hear the characters talk then there is silence and then BAM my ears hurt because the sound was too loud and my speakers were turned up, seriously, there's no need to greatly increase the volume of some sounds, just increase them slightly.

im looking forward to seeing the next chapter.
dont rush it.
:)
7/10

horror with quality

excellent !
please, tell me there will be a sequel.
and please send this video and script to a movie producer.
this cold be great as a live-acxtion movie !
an animation that grabs me on like this, i can only imagine it as a live-action movie. it could end up as a cult dark claustrophobic movie

DUDE!

THIS needs FINISHED!!!! RIGH NOW!
I COMMAND THE AND ALL THAT IS EVIL TO AWAKEN AND FINISH THIS SERIES!!!!

WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!? WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!?

holy crap man, while i have to admit im disappointed in your cancellation of the Zelda UO series (and while im hoping its not the "end" of it cuz i loved the story) your new stuff is absolutely amazing. At any rate, cant wait to see what happens here. Keep up the awsomeness!
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