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Mar 21, 2010 | 7:11 PM EDT

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Hi! This in finally here... I wrote this thing and I am the artist to haha. So this is it, Uzbekistan is an awesome country in the world with a lot of problem... including U.S. troops. I hope you find this very funny and well animated. Fro and Nick made the voices for this movie I hope you like the hole movie.
Thanks for watching, voting and reviewing,
MonoFlauta
PS: It has an Easter egg.

Reviews


InsaneScaryMovieGuyInsaneScaryMovieGuy

Rated 5 / 5 stars March 22, 2010

Awesome Movie Nigguher!!!!!

You Are SO Cool Homie Make More Movies!!!!!!!!


MonoFlauta responds:

great, thanks a lot for the review! (good to see good reviews :P)


FroFro

Rated 5 / 5 stars March 23, 2010

~ Review Request Club ~

~ Animation/Graphics ~

They weren't the best, but like you said before you rather do the writing and programming then you would the animation. The drawings were what really needed to be worked on in this piece. The animation that you did have was good enough for what happened in the flash in my opinion. A lot of the drawings seem a bit messy though.

~ Story/Content ~

The first scene is a nice introduction to the movie, but really doesn't have too many jokes. The middle scene is really funny in my opinion and I laugh at the evil laughter part because it goes for so long. The panning back and forth between the characters makes it funny.

The last scene with the soldier was funny too because it shows how dumb people in the United States (aka AMERICA lololololol) can really be. I love the line, "Ehh... I don't understand the question."

~ Audio ~

Nick's voices are really good, but mine could be a lot better. The quality is actually really good. (Comment directed towards Coop) It's just how flash reduces the quality and how turning the file into a MP3 reduces the quality. I think we should work with Wavs. in the future because their quality is a lot better.

Plus I have a wonderful singing voice.

~ Overall ~

It may be lacking in the quality of the artwork a bit, but it makes me laugh a lot and the story is funny enough to make up for it in my opinion. Good work.

~ Review Request Club ~


MonoFlauta responds:

"They weren't the best, but like you said before you rather do the writing and programming then you would the animation. The drawings were what really needed to be worked on in this piece. The animation that you did have was good enough for what happened in the flash in my opinion. A lot of the drawings seem a bit messy though."

Yes that is my weak point... i need to practice it obviously... but is getting better :p

"The first scene is a nice introduction to the movie, but really doesn't have too many jokes. The middle scene is really funny in my opinion and I laugh at the evil laughter part because it goes for so long. The panning back and forth between the characters makes it funny.
The last scene with the soldier was funny too because it shows how dumb people in the United States (aka AMERICA lololololol) can really be. I love the line, "Ehh... I don't understand the question.""
yes my strong point lol :P i would like to by sometimes only a writer but is difficult :P

"Nick's voices are really good, but mine could be a lot better. The quality is actually really good. (Comment directed towards Coop) It's just how flash reduces the quality and how turning the file into a MP3 reduces the quality. I think we should work with Wavs. in the future because their quality is a lot better. "

Yes we talked about the MP3 and the Wavs... the problem with the wavs is the wheight :S

"Plus I have a wonderful singing voice."

Keep lying your self until you believe it :p hahaha XD

"It may be lacking in the quality of the artwork a bit, but it makes me laugh a lot and the story is funny enough to make up for it in my opinion. Good work."

Good work you to :P
haha

thanks for reviewing


ClitthenaClitthena

Rated 5 / 5 stars March 24, 2010

LOL

i like it.i'm not good in giving review but i enjoyed watching this.


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MonoFlauta responds:

Great :D thanks for reviewing :P


RogerBKRogerBK

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars April 1, 2010

lol

Nice, man, as all of your movies with Fro... You guys make a real great group!!

First of all, I want to say that Fro's voice is really awesome (It's a LIE!!) and it made me laugh so much, because his drawing was great, and pretty funny, I laughed so much when the movie started because of the voices, they're all great, and the jokes are pretty funny too!!

The drawings weren't bad, and you showed NG that it's not required great animation and artwork for a nice and funny movie, also, with Fro and Nick in the voices, no one can't laugh.

The voices were nice, the animation, too, also, the joke of the Gold and the Dollar were pretty funny, (black humor) I wanna say that you guys have to keep it up, you always make something nice and awesome, keep it UP!!

(Review Request Club)
Roger


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MonoFlauta responds:

"Nice, man, as all of your movies with Fro... You guys make a real great group!!"
Haha thanks
"First of all, Kevin Bacon want to say that Fro's voice is really awesome (It's a LIE!!) and it made Kevin Bacon laugh so much"
Lol i will tell him that you said that XD
"because his drawing was great, and pretty funny, Kevin Bacon laughed so much when the movie started because of the voices, they're all great, and the jokes are pretty funny too!!"
Great thanks i made that :P
The drawings weren't bad, and you showed NG that it's not required great animation and artwork for a nice and funny movie, also, with Fro and Nick in the voices, no one can't laugh."
Haha thanks :P
"The voices were nice, the animation, too, also, the joke of the Gold and the Dollar were pretty funny, (black humor) Kevin Bacon wanna say that you guys have to keep it up, you always make something nice and awesome, keep it UP!!"
Great thanks a lot for reviewing!


StepStep

Rated 4 / 5 stars April 1, 2010

Good, but can be funnier...

Overall this is a decent submission. I got a laugh or two from it, so I suppose it has some OK jokes. It's fun to watch, has its moments and kept me interested all the way through, so yeah, good job ^^.

The graphics were alright, although at times they did seem very sketchy/messy, for example the background in Scene 2 wasn't drawn too well. Some of the characters were drawn pretty well though, and graphics overall were above average. Some small details and fine-tuning can also make this submission look neater, like for example in the menu, instead of making randomly positioned writing around the screen, add menu buttons under each other with neater text. Small details like this could really do wonders to this submission.

Animation needs a bit more work though. Lip sync could do with some touching up, there needs to be more facial expressions and hand gestures, and, well, what I'm trying to say is, we need moar animation. Some parts seem a little weird, like when that US army soldier ran around like a madman. When he ran away from the camera, instead of shrinking into the distance, when he went a little far away from the camera, all he did was disappear, if you get what I mean.

As for the concept, a little weird at times, but in all it was pretty original. The story progressed quite quickly with some random aspects, such as the news on TV coming out of nowhere, and the easter egg which has little to do with the story, so the story wasn't really too special. The humour section is where I have quite a bit to talk about. When the flash started, the jokes were bland and there weren't many. As I kept watching, I laughed a little, such as in the evil laughter part, and on TV with the chicken and the Uzbek, and the Olympics. The 'Obviously not made in Uzbekistan' written on the TV was quite funny too.

My biggest issue with the jokes would be that you could've done more with the jokes and added more. For example, in the beginning, you could have added more jokes for sure, and another example would be the Easter Egg. It really wasn't too funny, and for an Easter Egg, was disappointing. The evil laughter part was alright, but was pretty stupid, and I think you could've taken that opportunity to make a good joke. Instead of keeping them laughing all on their own without anything happening, you could have made something happen while they were laughing,. The different camera angles was a nice touch, though.

There were a few spelling and grammar mistakes which, although didn't really do anything to ruin the submission, won't hurt to be fixed. Some examples of grammar mistakes would be in the beginning:
"How many gold do you want?"
It should be how MUCH gold, since gold is uncountable.
"me to"
It should be me TOO, since to is a preposition.

There were also parts where the subtitles weren't equal to what they were actually saying, especially in the interview with the U.S. soldier. Sure these are small defects and nitpicks, but if you don't fix them, it's like making the flash look like you did it in a hurry and couldn't bother fixing these small mistakes, which gives a bad impression, IMO. Wow, I'm an assy critic xD.

The audio was fine. There wasn't really any background music in the submission, but Fro singing at the beginning made me laugh xD. Fro is a natural singer *Cough*...... aaaanyway... the voice acting on the whole was fine, although what's weird about the voice acting is that some of the voices are quiet while some are loud, maybe because of Nick and Fro both using different mikes or something. There was a good range of different voices, and the voice of the U.S. soldier and the person selling the gold/cotton at the beginning were well done. Some of the other voices were a little dull and need more life to them though, but overall, voice acting was fine.

In general, this is an above-average submission which I enjoyed watching. Some parts could use some work, but this is fun to watch, and I liked it overall. Keep up the good work!
8/10
4/5

-Review Request Club-

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MonoFlauta responds:

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Yeah thanks, glad you like the jokes :P
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I rushed a little in someparts, because i though they were so important but yes, not all has an awesome quality :P
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Yes the idea of the guy from army was that he jumped and fall from a cliff :P it wasnt really well animated you are right :P
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Haha thanks, yeah not everyone like the jokes but i am happy that most of people like them :D I think the story is really nice to :P
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Yes but the funny thing of the laughing part it was that they keep laughing for a long time :P, well i think that is the funny part of that...
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Haha i told fro to CORRECT THE MISTAKES! he knows that is not my native language english :P Tell him he made that mistake lol :P
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Yes the problem with the subtitles is that Fro made them Haha no, the problem is that when he recorded he changed some words but then he didnt correct them when he send me again the script with the grammar correction (because i suck in english as you can see).
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Yes, i think that the soldier and the first uzbek that appear are the best ones :P i am agree with you.
9° Great thanks a lot for the HUGE review :P All in this review will be usefull for my next video :P
THANKS A LOT :P