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Mar 21, 2010 | 7:11 PM EDT

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Hi! This in finally here... I wrote this thing and I am the artist to haha. So this is it, Uzbekistan is an awesome country in the world with a lot of problem... including U.S. troops. I hope you find this very funny and well animated. Fro and Nick made the voices for this movie I hope you like the hole movie.
Thanks for watching, voting and reviewing,
MonoFlauta
PS: It has an Easter egg.

Reviews


KirbyfemurKirbyfemur

Rated 3 / 5 stars

Cookies

Well... I'll be as nice as i can to this one.

The timing for the mouths where done fine, but i'd work on making them a bit more fluid and human like. I know it's difficult to animate so i wont rag on this too hard.

The jokes, well they where a little lame at parts but it had it's moments, but the part when they where talking about the cotton seemed to go off onto another tangent and i couldn't tell if they where talking about gold or cotton. Though the cookie thing was nice, though the timing of the joke could use a little bit of work.

Okay, now for fro. Well.... You're mic isn't the best of quality i read in another review, so i wont comment on that part. But it felt very robotic, and bored. like you didn't really want to be doing the voice acting of this. So i'd say work on your articulation, as well as accents. I don't want to sound mean, just wanting to be helpful...

Anyways, keep on trying =3

<(Review Request Crew)>


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MonoFlauta responds:

Oks thanks a lot... fan of Kevin Bacon?
lol

Thanks for reviewing :P


XwaynecoltXXwaynecoltX

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

notbad

~~REVIEW~~
Well notbad the characters are decent the story is actually notbad and it has some decent humor fro did a good job i thought lol, but from what you have here i thought it was a decently made and mildly entertaining, so nice job all around

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add abit more humor in there it was ok but could use some more

~~OVERALL~~
A decent story and somewhat funny but needs more

~X~


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MonoFlauta responds:

"Add abit more humor in there it was ok but could use some more"

Yeah at the beggining is not good, but later is awesome :P you need to accept that lol

Thanks for reviewing!


ClitthenaClitthena

Rated 5 / 5 stars

LOL

i like it.i'm not good in giving review but i enjoyed watching this.


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MonoFlauta responds:

Great :D thanks for reviewing :P


FroFro

Rated 5 / 5 stars

~ Review Request Club ~

~ Animation/Graphics ~

They weren't the best, but like you said before you rather do the writing and programming then you would the animation. The drawings were what really needed to be worked on in this piece. The animation that you did have was good enough for what happened in the flash in my opinion. A lot of the drawings seem a bit messy though.

~ Story/Content ~

The first scene is a nice introduction to the movie, but really doesn't have too many jokes. The middle scene is really funny in my opinion and I laugh at the evil laughter part because it goes for so long. The panning back and forth between the characters makes it funny.

The last scene with the soldier was funny too because it shows how dumb people in the United States (aka AMERICA lololololol) can really be. I love the line, "Ehh... I don't understand the question."

~ Audio ~

Nick's voices are really good, but mine could be a lot better. The quality is actually really good. (Comment directed towards Coop) It's just how flash reduces the quality and how turning the file into a MP3 reduces the quality. I think we should work with Wavs. in the future because their quality is a lot better.

Plus I have a wonderful singing voice.

~ Overall ~

It may be lacking in the quality of the artwork a bit, but it makes me laugh a lot and the story is funny enough to make up for it in my opinion. Good work.

~ Review Request Club ~


MonoFlauta responds:

"They weren't the best, but like you said before you rather do the writing and programming then you would the animation. The drawings were what really needed to be worked on in this piece. The animation that you did have was good enough for what happened in the flash in my opinion. A lot of the drawings seem a bit messy though."

Yes that is my weak point... i need to practice it obviously... but is getting better :p

"The first scene is a nice introduction to the movie, but really doesn't have too many jokes. The middle scene is really funny in my opinion and I laugh at the evil laughter part because it goes for so long. The panning back and forth between the characters makes it funny.
The last scene with the soldier was funny too because it shows how dumb people in the United States (aka AMERICA lololololol) can really be. I love the line, "Ehh... I don't understand the question.""
yes my strong point lol :P i would like to by sometimes only a writer but is difficult :P

"Nick's voices are really good, but mine could be a lot better. The quality is actually really good. (Comment directed towards Coop) It's just how flash reduces the quality and how turning the file into a MP3 reduces the quality. I think we should work with Wavs. in the future because their quality is a lot better. "

Yes we talked about the MP3 and the Wavs... the problem with the wavs is the wheight :S

"Plus I have a wonderful singing voice."

Keep lying your self until you believe it :p hahaha XD

"It may be lacking in the quality of the artwork a bit, but it makes me laugh a lot and the story is funny enough to make up for it in my opinion. Good work."

Good work you to :P
haha

thanks for reviewing


CoopCoop

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Not bad

I'd say that this is a decent looking piece, but you could do with refining the animation a little more. Also, tell Fro to get a better mic, as the quality does suffer a little there, but it might just be that you've turned to volume up too much. I think that the sound quality can be improved, but not as much as the animation can. Fro just needs practice on more "generic Russian" voices.

Regarding the animation, perhaps it would be better to zoom in to the drawing and from there get better control over the drawing. When you zoom back out, it will look a lot better and more detailed. The way that the Uzbek's chin shape gets rather fat when he laughs just seems wrong. If you were to draw a few lines where his chins protray more rolls of fat there, the detail level would simply improve so much.

I think that you need to use something slightly smaller to draw with as well, as the large lines just take so much away from the image quality. Making this adjustment will certainly help your drawing style. Do you have a tablet? If not, I'd certainly recommend one for you, as it will help.

[Review Request Club]


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MonoFlauta responds:

Oks thanks a lot, i use big lines but then i small the size... the problem was with the zooms
Thanks for reviewgin and i will tell fro... but for me is ok dont know :P
Thanks