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Mar 21, 2010 | 10:13 AM EDT

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I like the city in the background of this text box.

Anyways... part two of the previous episode. Again focused on the new characters I introduced in the previous episode. This also marks the return of a few other characters. Great Job by all of the VAs.

I hope you all enjoy.

Reviews


DioragenDioragen

Rated 4 / 5 stars March 22, 2010

Movement?

Wherever did that go? Unless you got some incredible story going on, the characters should better move around a bit to... feel alive or something. And believe me, it wasn't the case.

Stock characters moving their mouths can work. But here, they just didn't. Not for me, anyway.

Other than that. Yeah, you seem to know what you're doing, and I hope it takes you somewhere. (Skill-wise, I mean)



XwaynecoltXXwaynecoltX

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars March 21, 2010

Overall a good animation

~~REVIEW~~
Hmm this was an overall good flash some nice artwork with characters and backrounds and even a decent story to go by, it can be better i belive, maybe its me but i didnt notice a play button at start, i ended up having to right clcik play, something to fix i think, anyways nice flash, improve on it just some details here and there

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The play button? it could use one, unless that was just some glich

~~OVERALL~~
Great art nice animation, all will injoy
~X~



JazLyteJazLyte

Rated 3 / 5 stars March 21, 2010

Bland

There's a solid drawing style here, decent voice acting, and the drawings are clean and crisp (less people here get that concept than you'd think). I've never seen the previous episodes so I suppose I can't really say too much about it...
However I have to admit that words like 'bland', 'flavorless' and 'blank' come to mind when I watch this. There is obviously alot of characters, but neither of them managed to say or do anything interesting through the whole episode. There's no style to it...nothing unique or interesting... It's just THERE. Another thing too is that even though the story may be decent but choosing not to put a "Previously" thing here after like 15 episodes probably isn't a good idea unless you're just not interested in drawing in new fans. It wasn't bad, it was just kinda the bare minimum.


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