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Hello, this is my first video I am posting at newgrounds. I have been working with flash for about one month now and this is my best flash until now.
Description of video -
A rabbit is walking around in the woods gathering eggs for easter. He suddenly sees a gigantic egg which he want's even more. Will he get the egg or not?
Could use some more work
This isn't one of the best flashes I've ever seen. You might want to work on making the character move and behave more realistic, I think it to be a little ''stiff''. For the design and sound effects I don't have a lot to say about, but you might want to improve your drawing skills in combination with your animation skills, for example, practice some with drawing and animating blood, and making flames more realistic.
However, for a first video, this is not bad!
thanks, I will practice with what you told me. I understand the unrealistic fire and blood :P, I will work hard to become a better drawer and animator.
Ran very slowly on my computer, but a very good animation none the less.
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