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Nothing special here just some stuff I made many many years ago
I'm all for artisitcs but,
I understand the style you're trying to get at, I'm not worried about the graphics being non human, but the animations are still choppy which is never good, if you smooth up that fbf the whole thing would look miles better. Secondly I thouhgt it was fairly short, and I realize a demo but with this length it's more like a teaser. One thing that kinda pissed me off was the key, why does everyone make keys look like that? (lol?) Hah, I know it's not anything big but every game uses keys like that and who in real life ACTUALLY DOES? LOL. In something non-serious it's kinda fitting cause that's an iconic key but since I've got a large feeling this isn't supposed to be funny or like light action, I'd change small details like that. For gameplay it's meh, choose your own adventures can be good and can be bad, always try to have a mix between the obvious answer being right and the not so obvious, but please dont make it random give hints in the scene which will kill you and which won't. I donno guess thats all I gotta say. I'll give you a six outta ten but probobly rate your full one a 7-10.
Thanks for the review :P - if only I could go back in time 7 years and tell my 16yo self what you just said
seems pretty good
what was there was pretty fun, i'd like to see a full version
looks cool so far
i like the idea, and i can say i look forward to c wut u do next, like the interactiveness, and the "ending" wus pretty good. i will say th animation cude b better, but overall this wus good, and had sum humor to it :)
Good job, caught my attention....
and then I heard the voice for blue waaaay too loud.
Second-Year Animation Film (2015)
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