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Mar 17, 2010 | 2:18 PM EDT

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I hope you like'it..I hope you comments, votes and rates my flash movies... short movies



Rated 3 / 5 stars

agree with bakasammi

your only a beginer
so you can only improve for the sequel
good luck with everything else
hope you can understand y i gave you a 6/10


Rated 3 / 5 stars


To the people below me, you need to remember that Newgrounds accepts ALL flash. Just because they are a beginner, doesn't mean you have to lash out at them.
To the maker of this flash:
I liked it, the rain sounds were very good.
Please make this longer ^_^
4 stars for the sounds
2 for the animation, 6/10. <3 Hope you continue making these and hope you get better critique. Have a nice career.

apit2010 responds:

thank you...


Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

needs some work

the animation was little bit slopy

apit2010 responds:

ok........but i want your submissions...


Rated 1 / 5 stars


I couldn't tell what was happening half the time so try to improve on your animation . It was also too short. Couldn't you just put all the parts into 1?

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apit2010 responds:

i don't know