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long, good and choppy
understand a thing, you will never leave the madness, the madness will be always with you, i mean, in your animations, you use madness feets on the characters, and they look fat,on leek and avokado, i see you using some madness hands on then, so, it´s better you get back animating madness, do it for your fans
Incredibly well animated.
Good sound quality.
I have only 2 problems.
1. No voice, while this is still a very good flash, voice would be nice. Even if you cant add voice, adding the option to click to get to the next speech bubble would be nice.
2. Although funny, and interesting, adding somewhat more of a plot would be helpful, for example they get on the tram and meet a hobo, I dont know im just spitballing.
I think you get what im saying, buts till amazing 9/10. Keep making more.
ummm it has potential
The Dialog it's self is very witty but... I'm sure you can find someone to do the voices because.... (sarcasm) every one loves reading speech bubbles.
I think that getting someone to do the voices or even doing them yourself would boost this from a 6 to a 10
The intro was actually quite good and I already expected a nice new series. But my hopes have become crushed pretty fast: Flash movies without voice acting are just not fun to watch. The jokes come out really bad. That's because they aren't very good in the first place but mostly because it doesn't work to write "(sarcastic)" to express a voice tone. Everything's much slower than it has to be in order to make those jokes at least partially funny.
Get yourself some voice actors or speak it yourself and ppl might consider to watch it till the end.
What kind of coincidence is that!?
Very nice flash man. It's genuinely funny and the opening is stylish.
A story about a dog!
this art teacher is WHACK!!!!
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